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ch.2, pg.76: “In Review”
I’m eager to get to Chapter 3 so this strip has a lot of dialogue crammed into it. My main point was to show that Mother Goose and Dr. Muffet are aware of everything that has gone on and it raises a lot of concerns in the back of their minds, but the heroes must continue on anyway.
VERY reminiscient of something I’ve watched, Tokyo Mew Mew is one, but I’m not sure it’s the main one. … Heck, this is very similar to Tokyo Mew Mew, provided you have glasses to conceal the big magical girl difference.
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Dammit, now I’m going to be working through the characters trying to match them up… I hope I haven’t screwed over my chance of getting assignments done.
Meanwhile, I do like this sort of thing. Lots of plotting is never a bad thing for a story. (Unless the entire book is just plotting and no-one actually does anything. I have read one of those before. @_@)
So to where the heroes will go next in Chapter 3 ? :(
I like how Mother Goose sits in a sticks-and-straw nest right next to the nice coat rack and end table with lamp.
I wondered for a moment why she didn’t just make a pile of pillows to nest on. …Then I remembered what some pillows are stuffed with and felt awkward.
(I understand you had a lot of text to squeeze in on this installment, but I feel it’s a bit of a shame that the text bubble is almost completely obscuring those ominous billowing curtains behind Mother Goose.)
Yeah, she was torn between putting that much text in or not, but decided on it anyway. Maybe she’ll put up an untexted version for you guys :)
Maybe I’ll do a better version of Mother Goose’s room too LOL. I’m still not happy with it. The curtains are ominous? Oh… I was hoping to detract from the fact that not much interesting is going on outside her window but a nice breeze. Heh.
Ha ha, my presumption about the curtains stems from seeing one too many tropes, I suspect.